tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4028803800543383653.post1025984103927017590..comments2023-07-05T05:41:29.177-07:00Comments on Bald Worm's Blog: Samar's 100 Word Challenge Entry (Week 10)Mr Hitchenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11086541034532445305noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4028803800543383653.post-86779873713365664992011-11-22T16:17:53.786-08:002011-11-22T16:17:53.786-08:00Hi Samar,
You ended your writing with an exciting...Hi Samar,<br /><br />You ended your writing with an exciting cliff hanger. I'm so curious to know what happens next! Suspense is a wonderful way to build interest for your readers. I do hope you'll continue this piece into a longer story.<br /><br />I'm so glad you joined in on this week's 100 Word Challenge. I hope you'll participate again soon!<br /><br />Mrs. Whitbread<br />http://kidblog.org/CondorBloggers/<br />Saskatchewan, Canadaaimlesscraphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02865804302653662853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4028803800543383653.post-86056646667316787872011-11-22T06:30:00.559-08:002011-11-22T06:30:00.559-08:00An interesting 100 WC Samar, well done. You have ...An interesting 100 WC Samar, well done. You have thought about your word choice carefully and have included a simile in your writing. Try to vary your sentences to reduce the number of times you need to use the word 'I'. I wonder what the alien did with you? Thanks for joining the 100 WC. Clare Powell (Teacher)Clare Powellnoreply@blogger.com