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on the radio I heard that the teracota ary in the british museem was a fake.
Emelia
Year 6
Mr H, here is my task two writing task:
"Now Lord Cragian will beg for mercy, and the antidote to this terrible pioson- adder venom!"
Lord Masterigium howled with laughter. His butler, Whiner, said politely; "Sir, how can you be sure that he will drink the poisened wine?"
Lord Masterigium (second in line to become the Duke of York, after Lord Craigian), chuckled.
"Whiner, you know nothing! Lord Craigian is sure to drink the wine: Cahteux Vortogueax is his favorite wine- he will drink... then die."
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What is a story map? You haven't explained what it is.
adding on to my last comment, would you please post a comment on the blog saying what a story map is, Mr H.
Mr H,
Merry x-mas!
Mr H I don't even know how to do non-linier!!
From the girl who wrote the suspense on your blog!
Story maps and non-linear stories are explained at www.baldworm.co.uk, ladies!
Mr H
I dont know what group I am in you didnt write it on my sheet.
Emelia
Em - you are in the group A: working against the clock!
Hope you are enjoying your writing!
Mr Hitchen Ive lost the piece of paper which has my group letter what group am i in?
Mr H
This is my writing task for task 4:
I leapt up and throgh my fist so it was hovering next to her face. Slowly, I took away my hand.She held her fist up and grited he teath. My face went red with rage. People had never called me stuped befor and I didnt know how to react so I did the same to her I called her stuped. Cathrin stomped off. She was probably to scared to fight me in case I used any of my karartie moves.
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Emelia
what section is story maps under? i can't find it. please leave a message saying where the story map explanation and what it is intitled.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
only six days!
P.S. yes, i am counting. but who isn't.
P.P.S. The st. trinnians film, out on friday, is probably going to be really funny! Can't wait to see it!
Choi!
(In italian, that means goodbye...i think!)
by the way, person who has lost their letter, how is mr h going to know what letter you are when he dosn't know who you are?
hey, did anyone watch the X Factor finals? I can't believe that Leon won, he is so bad! same difference should have won, they are way better, even though their songs were slightly cheesy!
by the way, emsi, are those teracota things at the british museum fake? they look excatly like originals.
It was me who said the sheet sorry gyys didnt think
from CAOIMHE
P.S. yes i did see the x factor results they were rubbish! I mean you know the world has gone crazy when Same Difference lose and leon wins
Cao - you need to do the descriptive tasks for Group B - Mr H.
P.S. All X-factor contestants are utter rubbish!
The X-factor is NOT rubbish. But, I don't think Leon should have won. Sorry you have so much homework guys I don't have any from Latymer over christmas! Ha ha
JOKE!
P.S. the last comment was from Naomi
The terra cotta army is fake
I defenatly think that same diffrence should of won But I did see rydion in a restarant
seriously you saw ridian? I hope you told him he sucks!
cAOIMHE
Hey guys im confused Mr hitchen ive just found my sheet and it says group c but you said group b. Which one should i do?
CAOIMHE
do both of them or arsk again or choose one
do both of them or arsk again or choose one
This Is my suspence passage for task 7
I quietly tiptoed to the old, wooden door of the casle on the great hill. As opened it it creaked suddenly and made me jump out of my skin. Slowly, I walked into the jet black houce. With no warning the door slammed shut behind me.
"Hello is anyone here"I shouted out. There was no reply. My voice ecoed arond the casle walls.
"Hello is anyone here"I repeted. My heart started pounding like a basketball in a perfeshonals macth as the lightes flikered on.
By Emelia
Year 6
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to anonymous person who claims to have wrote MY piece of suspense on this part of the blog, you are such a liar! and i did not write that message that you wrote, so you just like to take credit for other peoples work.
P.S. if you wrote it on another part of the blog, then i'm sorry.
seriiously emsi, where did you see rydian? did you get his autograph? i'm not a fan of him, but it would make a great christmas present for my dad! do you think he goes there quite often?
two days till christmas! Yeah!
st. trinians is so good! you need to see it, it's hilarious!
this english work is taking me forever!
this english work is taking me forever!
this english work is taking me forever!
this english work is taking me forever!
this english work is taking me forever!
this english work is taking me forever!
the podcast will not work on my computer, for some strange reason
we now that the english work is taking you forever!
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