L.O. To ensure that suspense and action are included in a short story.
Task: You are going to redraft your 'Snake!' story on the 'spy' wiki page, making sure you have responded to my comments on your first draft.
Feeling clever? Try to include the bracketing comma for names and interjections.
This is the last section of our suspense and action work, so you need to ensure this is your very best work, as I'll be adding an 'assessment comment' to the page before we lock it. You'll only get a good comment if you've made sure you've included suspense and action techniques!
You should also take this opportunity to read through the Easter holdiay homework so you can ask any questions on Monday. Click here for the homework page.
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