Thursday, 17 January 2008

Year 5 - Redrafting our Secret HQ descriptions



In class you began to type up your description of the secret hq on your page in our pupil wiki. Your homework is to complete writing it up.

Remember that this is a great opportunity to improve your writing as you go - and do try to use all of Bald Worm's descriptive techniques!

Feeling clever? Don't forget to try to throw in some impact sentences to 'balance' your prose!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mr Hitchen I left my description book at school. What should I do.(0013) (herm)

Anonymous said...

please reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(0013)