Showing posts with label Adventure and Mystery stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Adventure and Mystery stories. Show all posts

Tuesday, 10 June 2008

Year 3 Creative Writing - Exciting Opening Lines!


L.O. To collect exciting opening lines

Please look through your books at home, and in the library, for five books that begin with an exciting opening line. Bring these books to the lesson next Tuesday!

You can learn why exciting opening lines are so important by clicking here.

Feeling clever? Find some opening lines written in the first person that are based around something surprising.

Tuesday, 29 April 2008

Year 3 Fiction - 'Shark!'



To revise combining passage of description that 'sets the scene' with dialogue.

Your homework is to write 1/2 side of A4 entitled 'Shark!'. Two children - you and a friend - are at the beach.

* Spend 7-8 lines using the five senses, colours and similes to 'set the scene'

* Then use indented direct speech as your characters discuss the shark swimming towards you, like this:

"What is it?" I asked.
"I don't know," replied Alice. "But it sure is coming this way!"

Feeling clever? Click here to learn about how shown feelings can bring your stories to life.

Tuesday, 22 April 2008

Year 3 Creative Writing Homework - Adventure and Mystery Stories - Combining Speech and Description



L.O. To open a story by setting the scene and following it with direct speech.

In the Autumn term we focussed on writing dialogues using direct speech; in the Spring term we studied descriptive techniques.

This term, we are going to write simple adventure stories that combine description and speech.

In class, we wrote we described a cave (using the five senses, colours and similes) and then wrote a conversation to go with it.

Homework: Look at the haunted house picture we studied in class.

Imagine you are stood outside it. In your book, under the heading 'Description of a Haunted House', describe the haunted house in your own words using the five senses, colours and similes. Write 6-7 lines

Then, under the heading 'Conversation', write the conversation you imagine you would have with your friend about entering the cave. Don't forget to indent your direct speech! Watch this video to revise this key skill:



Feeling clever? Don't forget to include similes when you 'set the scene'

You can revise descriptive techniques by clicking here; revise story dialogue by clicking here.