To revise combining passage of description that 'sets the scene' with dialogue.
Your homework is to write 1/2 side of A4 entitled 'Shark!'. Two children - you and a friend - are at the beach.
* Spend 7-8 lines using the five senses, colours and similes to 'set the scene'
* Then use indented direct speech as your characters discuss the shark swimming towards you, like this:
"What is it?" I asked.
"I don't know," replied Alice. "But it sure is coming this way!"
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