Sunday, 15 March 2009
Year 6 Flat World Stories & School Magazine Work - Writing a Second Draft
In class we looked at giving positive, constructive feedback using the 'elbow' and PQP methods. Using the feedback you received on your first attempt, I want you to write a second draft of your story.
Don't forget you can revise the key description and characterisation techniques that should be at the heart of any story you write at Bald Worm.
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