Thursday, 20 November 2008
Year 5 - Writing a Longer Description: Evacuees!
L.O. To revise planning and writing a longer description; to include simile and metaphor in a longer description.
Please plan and write a longer description (five paragraphs; 1 side of A4 - not five pages; not half a page!): imagine you are an evacuee and you have just moved to a big farm in the country. Describe your new home.
Try to include both simile and metaphor.
Feeling clever? Included the listing and the joining commas
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it helped alot !
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