Friday 16 November 2007

Year 5 Creative Writing - Continuing a Passage




L.O. To understand the need to ask questions of a text before continuing a passage

We looked at the questions you must ask before continuing a passage. Revise continuing a passage by clicking here.

Homework: Complete the first draft of your 'War Horse' story. We'll begin redrafting it next week. Don't forget to set the scene and include lots of shown feelings. Write 1 1/2 sides of A4.

Please read your work to someone at home when you've finished. Ask them what they enjoyed, and one thing you could improve next week.

Feeling clever? You've been collecting verbs of movement. Use them to describe how the horse moves.



P.S. Don't forget to bring in your kung-fu punctuation cards on Monday!

3 comments:

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Anonymous said...

cool movements i want a horse

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