Thursday, 5 November 2009
Year 6 Fiction: 'Femme Fatale' Rewrite
We've been writing 'Noir' stories. Listen to one of the first drafts, and keep your ears peeled for some brilliant use of personification:
Task: We've been thinking about creating atmosphere in our stories. Please redraft your 'Femme Fatale' timed writing piece, adding additional Noir slang, developing the atmosphere and working towards the target on your card. Write 1 1/2 sides of A4.
Feeling clever? Next week we are going to focus on the semi-colon. Try throwing in one or two into your story!
And just for fun:
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