On Monday, we revised character descriptions, focussing on 'zooming in', colour and the use of similes to describe a character. Revise that work by clicking here.
Today we revised including these character descriptions in the first 15 lines of a short story. Revise our work on story structure by clicking here.
Task: Write the first 1/2 page of a story entitled 'Halloween'. Follow our story structure. Finish the first 1/2 page with a character description.
Feeling clever? Use all three of the commas we've studied (listing, joining and abverb-starter) and include a bracket in the first seven lines!
Feeling really clever? Try to include personification when you set the scene.
1 comment:
mr h why does ur face look like a pumpkin in that picture?
006 aka nom and sim aka I69
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