Enjoy Zahra's Week 10 Entry:
...as I turned around it changed shape...
I looked again, and there I saw it - a black haired, green-eyed creature staring at me with anger. He came forward and forward until...
“AAAAAAHHHHHHH!”
I ran and ran, but he grabbed and pulled.
“AAAAHHH! Please don’t hurt me!” I ran free.
I hurried and hurried.
Suddenly, I heard a fall. It was the creature who almost killed me...and I knew that this street was haunted.
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2 comments:
Hi Zahra - A wonderful interpretation of this week's 100WC phrase. Great use of adjectives that really bring your piece to life. Excellent!
A great 100WC Zahra! I really enjoyed reading this as you have used a good variety of language features. Your dramatic and mysterious ending also adds to your piece of writing. Hope to read another of your 100WC's soon!
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